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the chorus is seemed to be used a bit too much throughout the song, without long enough breaks in between the verses. i like the way how the first and ...

if it's to be used as lyrics it needs a rythym to it. but i like it =] it shows a lot of emotion, especially the 'bleeding on the tabe' ...

This gave me goosepimpless Tis really sad, really emotional and powerful I've felt like this loads Lonliness is one of the worst things ever, especially like this =[ Theres not ...

It's very graphic, thats one of the things il ove about your work, theres lots of imagery in it, its a pleasure to read =] The lyrics really have so ...

It doesnt seem to flow well, but the lyrics arevery good =] If anything, the chorus might be quite repetetive as its quite long and as its after each verse ...

I liked it, i just, dunno, didn't really feel it I got the idea but there's just something missing That may just be me, im into imagery, and for this ...

Short, but when has size mattered ^.^ If this was one of your first songs, then i'd love to see them now, this is amazing =] This is one people ...

Again, this is really good =] I kinda ended up paying this, it's really good to put a tune with ^.^ This one isn't that repetive, you've evened out the ...

This song has lots of emotion in, its great =] Like Dr Jamie. Bondage said, you could of took either added some extra verses or lengthened your original ones, because ...

wow =] You really used a lot of good imagary in there ^.^ The first verse is my faourite i think, and a catching opener. And also, it seems quite ...

tres coolios =] never knew there was a lyric forum =P I shall be posting i love the way you got so much emotion into such a piece i can ...

hehe, mine isnt going to be half as long as all the rest =] I didn't have the concentration span, and can barely pick up the screw ups in my ...

Thats freaky, its like Matrix stuff hehe. What human kind will end up being. The way you made the characters so different realy worked with the story, and what happened, ...

i Liked, the bit where you said She'd be another girl conquered reminded me of the New Found Glory, Kiss Me Video, where he makes a tally of the girls ...

This is actually really wierd, but in a good way =] It seemed like you were trying to go on the lnes of the narator going to sleep, but it ...